Review: Feedback by D L Richardson

Review: Feedback by D L Richardson

Review: Feedback by D L Richardson
Feedback by D.L. Richardson

Genres: Science Fiction, Young Adult
Publication Date: April 19th 2013
Format: eBook
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Listening to your inner voice can get you killed.

Ethan James, Florida Bowman, and Jake Inala are three teenagers who receive much-needed organ transplants. Two weeks later they are inadvertently recruited by the CIA when a spy dies halfway through his mission. Three bacteria bombs are set to detonate, spreading illness and death across the planet, and it’s up to Ethan, Florida, and Jake to deactivate them.

Except that they have no idea where the bombs are located.

Kidnapped for information they can’t possibly know, and fuelled by the spirit of a dead CIA agent, Ethan, Florida, and Jake must look deep inside themselves if they are to finish the mission and save millions of lives. But they’re being held captive in a strange place by a man who believes in Feedback, the theory that information is retained in the memory of organs–in this case those of a certain dead CIA agent donor. And their captor will stop at nothing to get the information retained in their newly transplanted organs.

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I received this book for free from the author in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

Ethan James is a 16-year-old jock who suffers from a hereditary disease that has effected both of his kidneys.

Florida Bowman is an artistic 16-year-old girl who loves to dance and act on stage and also suffers from kidney failure.

Jake Inala is a 15-year-old who has a love for weapons and a strong desire to become a top Marine when he reaches the age of enlistment, but he also has extensive liver damage.

All three of these people have some very significant things in common, the most obvious being that they are all gravely ill and in need of an organ transplant. Another thing that they have in common is the fact that they all desperately want  to get back to the lives that they had before they became sick.This is the time in their lives when they are supposed to feel invincible, be reckless, and make mistakes. But they don’t have the same luxuries that most people their age take for granted and have to spend most of their lives in hospitals, taking medicine, and worrying that they won’t make it to see 18. Enter Dylan Black, a young up and coming hotshot in the CIA whose life is tragically cut short during a mission. Ethan, Florida, and Jack all receive their transplants thanks to Dylan and even though he is dead, he needs them to return the favor and help him complete the mission that took his life.

After they receive their transplants, the exciting part of the story begins, and the overall tone of the book is lifted to a more lighthearted place. When he died, Dylan Black had just hidden three bombs that contain deadly toxins, but of course he didn’t have the time to disarm them because then we wouldn’t have a plot. Ethan, Florida, and Jack all have a connection with Dylan because they carry a piece of him with them, and he is able to communicate with them and share all that he has learned.

The book has supernatural elements that are based on scientific facts, but it’s really  a spy novel. So after the first 50% which deals mainly with illness, the book becomes a ton of fun! I liked the first half, but I hope any future books in the series will be like the second half and focus more on the action.

There is a very small hint of romance or maybe even a love triangle between the three main characters, both Ethan and Jack have crushes on Florida, and she returns the feelings, but it is not a main focus of the story. It might develop further in the future, but I personally hope not because I enjoyed not having to worry about that type of drama while I was reading about these kids fighting for their lives. I like the fact that real life was more important than romance for once!

I usually steer clear of books when they revolve around illness because they tend to be difficult to read,  but Feedback never had me reaching for the tissues. I felt for the characters and rooted for them to get better, but because I knew from the start that they would receive the transplants, my stomach wasn’t tied up in knots the entire time. Most of the suspense came from the spy missions not the hospital.

Feedback was fun, inventive, and I look forward to reading more a bout these three awesome survivors!

Because of language, I would recommend this book for ages 12 and up.

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Author Biography

About D.L. Richardson

Music first captured the creative interest of Irish born author D L Richardson. From choir, to learning guitar, to singing with the school band and performing in school musicals, to eventually forming her own rock band. At age 26 she swapped her instruments for typewriters and later computers and began her writing career instead.

She had a few short stories published, but creativity and passion are only two aspects of writing. She took a few short courses on writing and then focused on writing novels.

She now has six books published and usually has a few works in progress at the same time. She writes speculative fiction – horror, paranormal, fantasy, science-fiction, time travel. Loathe to be put into a box, the one thing about D L Richardson books is that the reader will enjoy a unique story.

She lives in Australia on the NSW South Coast with her husband and dog. When she's not writing or reading she can be found playing her piano or guitars, renovating the house, or walking the dog.

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